﻿Turnabout is Fair Play - N.C.U. - Part 4 Alt Ending
 
Key: MD, FD, MF, FF, 
 
Description: Deciding he wants a little fun, Josh sets an ambush for Rayne. But in this alternate version of the story, she chooses not assist in capturing her roommate and instead to be the captive herself. 
 
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        A few days had passed since Josh’s little adventure in the girl’s dorm room. He had managed to slip out of Laura’s room unnoticed, and a few little suggestions left in her mind made it so that she didn’t remember much of the evening. Just that she knew Josh and that they seemed to have a connection. The few times he had encountered her on campus since then, she would simply smile and wave but didn’t seem to have any lingering memories that would complicate things going forward. 
        The same was true of Klaire. She had been busy most of the week studying for an exam, but the few times he had seen her she didn’t mention anything at all about him having hypnotized the three of them. And she never brought up anything that happened between her and Rayne once he had left them alone. 
        Rayne, on the other hand, clearly remembered what had happened. Although they hadn’t really crossed paths since that evening, the few times he noticed her in the common areas she would make eye contact and blush profusely before diving back into whatever she was doing, or simply make a strategic exit before he could talk to her. 
        Now that exams were over and it was a quiet Saturday afternoon, Josh decided that he would pay the roommates a little visit. He knew from talking to Klaire that she was planning to hide out and read in her room for the afternoon, and that Rayne liked to go to the gym on Saturdays to try and burn off the tension from the week. This gave him an opportunity to intercept her on her way back to the dorm, when she was already tired and worn out. 
        His plan was simple. He hung out by the door to the girls dorm and waited for someone else to put in the code to get inside. Security at the door was so laughably bad that he simply walked past the young woman who was manning the desk without her so much as even acknowledging his existence. The women that he had followed in also didn’t seem to notice or care that he was there. Once inside, he made his way down the first floor hallway to the far end where the stairs were. Lucky for him the stairs were open to everyone, and, more importantly, had their own door that was unlocked and soundproof. Once he was inside the stairwell it was an easy two flights of stairs up to the third floor and, wouldn’t you know it, Klaire and Rayne’s door was exactly across the hallway from the stairs. The entire process took less than five minutes and all he had to do was crack the door open just a bit and use the reflection of the window at the end of the hallway to see down the entire hall. From there all he had to do…was wait patiently. (and for those of you reading this going “this is oddly specific” see the note at the bottom of the story!)
        A few minutes, and three false alarms later, he heard the familiar ding of the elevator and the sound of the door opening. He glanced through the door into the window’s reflection and down the hall to see a very tired Rayne slowly trudging her way back to her room. She was clearly exhausted but her wet hair implied that she had showered after her work out…or she was just super sweaty. He hoped it was the first. 
        As predicted, she didn’t even notice that the door to the stairway was open since she was too focused on getting into the room so she could lay down. She stood in front of the door and went to pull her keys out of her pocket when Josh made his move. With a speed and grace that was unusual for him, he opened the door enough to slip through, moved right up behind the young woman, put one hand around her waist to support her and one hand up to her forehead, pulling her head back and whispering “Right to sleep now Rayne!” into her ear. 
        The entire move lasted only a few seconds. Rayne barely had time to gasp before she felt herself falling back against Josh’s chest and being slowly dragged backwards with her heels dragging along the floor and into the stairway. Out of instinct she kept hold of her keys to avoid any unnecessary noise. Once they were in the stairwell he gently closed the door and then balanced Rayne against the wall so he could hold her in place. “Gotcha.” he whispered with a smile as he tilted Rayne’s head up and kissed her. 
        From Rayne’s perspective the entire thing was a blur, she had been dragging herself back to her dorm to rest and fumbling with her keys when all of a sudden she felt like she was grabbed from behind! She tried to struggle but then she heard a very familiar voice tell her to sleep…and everything just faded away. On some level she knew it had to be Josh, and that sent a shiver through her body as she leaned back against his chest and let him drag her backwards. She wasn’t even really aware of where she was being taken, the whole scene was just so…exciting in a strange way. The next thing she knew she felt herself being kissed and was more than happy to respond in kind. As she felt her tongue slide along the mystery attacker’s tongue she heard a finger snap echo through the room around her and her body came to life. One hand wrapped around the man’s torso to support herself while the other one moved behind his head to pull him closer into the kiss. There was a passion in her response. She’d been hypnotized numerous times over the course of the semester, but this…something about this was different and she liked it. 
        Josh felt her wake up from her induced slumber and respond to the kiss with an eager passion. He kept the kiss up for a few more moments before pulling back, but kept his forehead pressed against Rayne’s. “Well hello there.” he said in his best Obi-Wan impression. 
        Rayne just chuckled and rolled her eyes. “Don’t ruin the moment with bad impressions.” she snarked before giving him another soft kiss. “I was wondering if I was going to see you again.” She looked into his eyes with a warmth that Josh hadn’t experienced from Rayne since meeting her. 
        “Exam week is always a bitch,” he sighed. “Plus it took me time to figure out how to get in here without being seen.” 
        Rayne pulled back a bit in surprise. “Have you seen how bad the security is here?” she asked in confusion. 
        “Yes. Yes I have. Hence why I am here and you are my prisoner!” he said with a smirk. “Or perhaps…accomplice?” 
        Rayne raised an eyebrow curiously. “What did you have in mind?” she said as a smile formed on her face.  
        Rayne’s expression shifted as her posture took a slightly more confident stance, despite being pressed into a concrete wall by someone nearly twice her size. “A prisoner, hmmm?” she asked, trying to hide a smile. “And what would being your prisoner entail…exactly?” 
        Josh gave her a little smile and leaned in closer to her. “Oh you know, the usual… being carried back someplace safe…” he nodded at her dorm room a few feet away behind the closed door, “possibly a strip search… “ he began leaning in more to slide his nose along hers, “maybe a little…body cavity search. You know, the usual.” he finished with a wink. 
        “Body cavity search? Eww, gross!” Rayne replied, folding her arms in genuine disgust.
        Josh sighed and rolled his eyes. “Sex, Rayne. It was a euphemism for sex. Try to keep up, you’re supposed to be the smart one here, not me.” 
        Rayne blushed and looked back at him with a grin. “I am the smart one, and I knew it was a euphemism, dummy. But if I go along with it then I’m not exactly a prisoner, am I?” she finished bluntly while staring into his eyes. 
        Josh blinked a few times in confusion. “That…strangely makes sense. So, prisoner it is then, hmm?” he asked with a bit of an excited smile. 
        Rayne smirked and folded her arms tightly across her chest. “If you think you can capture me, then you are more than welco…” Her reply was cut off as Josh very quickly snapped his fingers in front of her eyes, causing her head to jerk back as her arms dropped in an attempt to bat his hand away. 
        As she did Josh carefully grabbed her left wrist, and brought it down while his other hand pressed three fingers gently into Rayne’s forehead. In one smooth motion he pulled her arm down and pushed her head back all as he commanded her to just “Sleep!” 
        Rayne’s mind was in full overdrive. The snap had broken her train of thought and her body's natural reflex to try and get his hand out of her face and left her in a state of surprise as she struggled to regain control. She was strong, but she wasn’t strong enough to stop Josh from pulling her arm forward. She felt her body jerk and her eyes opened to look at him, fully intent on resisting…until she felt his fingers press into her forehead. The entire situation left her confused and struggling to figure out what was happening, and then she heard it. A simple command to sleep, which slipped right past her usual conscious defenses and right into her subconscious mind…which happily obeyed without a single thought as she felt her mind just turn off. She let out a soft sigh as her arms and shoulders slumped while her eyes rolled up into her head before closing softly as she fell forward and landed onto Josh’s chest. 
        Josh held her there for a moment,whispering into her ear. “So deep, so calm…relaxed and helpless. Just slipping down…down…down to sleep now. Nothing else matters, everything is just fading away as you simply surrender…you are captured…you are helpless…you are my prisoner now…isn’t that right, Rayne?” His tone was slow and seductive. 
        “Yes…” Rayne let out with a soft whisper. 
        Josh smiled and tilted Rayne back so she was leaning against the wall again, making it easier to help support her weight. It also let him look at her face while she was hypnotized. Rayne almost always had a scowl or a furrowed brow or some other form of facial expression. But here, here she was completely limp and relaxed, her expression was gone, her mouth was open and her face had a very peaceful, beautiful look to it. “As my prisoner…” Josh whispered into her ear, “you will do whatever I tell you without question…that's what you wanted after all, isn’t it Rayne?” His hand gently cupped her breast as his finger moved along her nipple. 
        Rayne’s body jerked slightly in response to the touch, not out of surprise but out of pleasure. Her head tilted back as a soft little moan escaped her lips as she answered in a whisper again. “Yes.”
        Josh gave a devious little smile and tilted her head up to steal a kiss. If he was going to enact his current plan he was going to have to take her to the dorm room, and since Klaire was home he wouldn’t get a moment of alone time with Rayne. So he took the opportunity to indulge himself in a kiss.  
        Rayne responded to the kiss in a lazy, sleepy fashion. Her tongue barely moved to respond to his but it was clear from the moan that she was enjoying herself. 
        Josh pulled back and whispered again. “Sleep…” as he let Rayne tilt forward. 
        Rayne felt herself falling forward and then landing on something hard at about waist height. A moment later she felt her feet leaving the ground as Josh lifted her over his shoulder.
        Rayne wasn’t exactly light, she lifted weights and had a solid core of muscle, but Josh was, as previously stated, nearly twice her size, and she was just within his level of strength to lift off of the ground. It was still awkward, she was hard to hold but he had just enough strength to do so. He could feel her arms swaying and bumping into his legs and her head gently bouncing off of the small of his back as he supported her with one hand on her thigh and the other on her butt, less for support and more to cop a feel. 
        He opened the stairwell door and peeked out into the hallway to make sure no one was there. Seeing that it was clear he quickly stepped out, still holding Rayne over his shoulder. and knocked on Klaire’s door. Once he did he quickly stepped back into the stairwell, leaving the door open so she would see him but that no one else would if they opened their doors. 
        A few moments later the door opened and Klaire glared out in an effort to intimidate whomever it was that dared to disturb her reading time. But the moment she saw Josh her face turned from anger to excitement to confusion. 
        Josh quickly held a finger up to his lips in a ‘shhh’ motion and then slowly rotated so that Rayne’s upside down face could be seen by Klaire. 
        Klaire giggled and stepped out into the hallway to act as a look out and then quickly wave him into her dorm room. Josh ran past her as quickly as he could while carrying Rayne and Klaire followed him into the room, then closed and locked the door behind her. “Well…” she said with a smile as she moved closer to him. “This feels familiar.” she said referencing the first time that they had met. 
        “I know right. It’s the only way to really move her, she’s too heavy to drag.” he said as he slowly lowered Rayne down to her bed and let her flop back onto the mattress, her hair splaying out around her as she did so. 
        “You find her sleeping off a bender again or something?” Klaire said as she ran her arm along his with a playful smile. 
        “Nope, I captured her in the hallway and hypnotized her. She’s not unconscious, she's helpless…isn’t that right Rayne?” he asked with a smile. 
        “Yes.” came the slow reply from the sleeping Rayne. 
        At the realization of what was going on, Klaire’s face lit up. “So I see!” she said with a giggle. “So you have a prisoner, interesting. What is your plan for her?”
        “Oh I had an interesting plan, actually.” he said with a devious grin as he snapped his fingers in Rayne’s direction “The prisoner will stand.” he said in a commanding tone. 
        Rayne's eyes opened but were clearly not focusing as she stood up and stared off into space, vaguely staring in Klaire’s direction but obviously not seeing her. 
        Klaire raised an eyebrow at Josh before moving over to slide her hand along Rayne’s clearly hypnotized form. Her touch was met with a soft moan as Rayne’s eyes gently rolled into her head. “So what’s your plan, big boy?” Klaire asked Josh with a smile. 
        “Well…” he said with a grin, “first we have to get her out of those clothes.” Klaire simply smiled in response.  
        Between the two of them it didn’t take long to strip Rayne of her clothes. Klaire pulled her shirt up and over her head, letting her breasts bounce free before her arms fell imp at her sides. Meanwhile, Josh undid her jeans and slowly pulled them down her legs, feeling up the toned muscles of her thighs as he did. Moments later Rayne's bra landed softly on the floor, exposing the woman’s modest breasts, which somehow seemed to be more prominent on her toned frame. Finally, Josh moved her panties down her legs, rubbing his thumb over her clit as he did and causing her to let out another soft moan.  
        Klaire stood next to her hypnotized roommate and looked at Josh. “What's your next plan, hmmm?” she asked as she struck a sexy pose next to Rayne. 
        “I’m glad you asked!” Josh said with a smile before snapping his fingers directly in front of Klaire’s face. “Sleep!” he commanded her. 
        The moment his fingers snapped in front of her eyes Klaire’s mind went blank. Her head jerked a bit in surprise but her face instantly went slack as her arms fell to her sides and her eyes started to flutter. The word “Sleep!” made her eyes slam shut as her head fall to her chest. 
        Josh moved up to Klaire and tilted her head up so he could see her face. “You find her attractive, don’t you Klaire.” he whispered. 
        “Yes.” she responded.
        “You’ve had fantasies about her doing things to you…haven’t you?” His question was met with another affirmative reply. “You want her to pleasure you, don’t you Klaire…” his question was answered with another soft, whispered “yes.” “Good girl.” he whispered softly before stealing a kiss and putting his hand on her forehead, giving her a gentle push backwards towards Rayne’s bed. 
        Klaire barely twitched before falling back onto the bed where she rested gently. Josh smiled and then looked at Rayne. “Remove her pants, prisoner.” he commanded her. 
        Rayne’s eyes rolled back down so that she could see, and in a robotic fashion turned towards her sleeping roommate and started to slowly undo the woman’s jeans. Josh stood back and watched with an amused and aroused smile as the two hypnotized roommates played out their little display before him. One completely limp with her skin slowly being exposed and giving gentle little moans of pleasure as it was. And the other completely oblivious and robotic, sliding her jeans and then her panties slowly off her body. It didn’t take long but he was completely focused the entire time. 
        “Very good.” he said as Rayne dropped Klaire’s panties onto the floor. “Now kneel, prisoner.” he commanded. 
        Rayne dropped to her knees, so close to the bed that she was between Klaire’s parted legs with one foot on either side of her thighs. 
        Josh leaned in and put a hand on Rayne’s head and whispered into her ear. “You want to pleasure her. You need to pleasure her. It’s what you’ve wanted…what you’ve needed. You know what to do, what you’ve wanted to do…just…indulge.” And with that he lowered her face forward so her mouth was over Klaire’s pussy. 
        Josh let his hand slide back along Rayne’s body as the sound of her tongue sliding along Klaire’s groin softly filled the room. A moment later Klaire’s moans started, soft and low but audible. Josh smiled and whispered. “You’re doing so well now, my prisoner…and as a reward, you will receive pleasure too. You want that, don’t you?” he asked.
        Rayne’s head nodded in agreement as her tongue slipped out and along the folds of her hypnotized roommate's pussy. 
        “I thought so.” Josh whispered as the sound of his zipper opening echoed in the mostly silent room. “Raise your butt and spread your legs,” he whispered. 
        Rayne responded, raising her butt and eventually moving off of her knees to her feet. It left her bent all the way over so as to not disturb her previous instruction to give Klaire pleasure. 
        Klaire, on the other hand, was lost in a world of bliss. Her mind was blank so there were no thoughts, only the rippling of pleasure through her body with every single twitch of her roommate's tongue. It was even more arousing for her knowing that Rayne was hypnotized, just like her, and that Josh had been the one to get them both. Then a slow shudder through Rayne’s tongue sent a wave of pleasure through her which culminated in a louder moan. 
        As Josh slid himself into Rayne he felt her shudder and heard Klaire reply with another, louder, moan. “Oh this will work!” he thought to himself as he started to slowly push himself deeper into Rayne. He immediately felt her body respond as she started to pant from the feeling, while he moved his hands along her naked back. 
        Rayne shuddered from the sensation. She had felt it before, the previous year before she went away to college. It seemed so distant, so forgotten, but yet now it was flooding back into her mind. She managed to push back against Josh to take him deeper into her, all while her passion pushed forward into Klaire’s helpless body, causing her hypnotized roommate to moan and shiver under her touch. 
        This created a pleasure feedback loop, every thrust of Josh into Rayne, made her shiver and shudder, which made her put more energy into her task between Klaire’s legs. Which in turn stimulated Klaire, making her body shiver and flush, her hands roamed very slowly along her own body as she let out a moan of intense pleasure. A look and a moan that encouraged Josh to continue even more eagerly with his current task. It was a wonderful feedback loop of pleasure… that, of course, had only one logical conclusion. 
        It was Josh who finished first, leaning forward and kissing Rayne’s back and holding her hips tight as he felt himself spasm and shudder deeply into the sensations. This, of course, rippled through Rayne, causing her to momentarily stop what she was doing and let out a high pitched moan before shoving her tongue as far into her roommate’s sex as she could. Klaire’s eyes flew open and she let out a not so subtle moan and sigh of pleasure as the three of them all climaxed together, each one building the other's pleasure. 
        After a few moments of this Josh leaned up, still inside of Rayne. “Klaire,” he snapped his fingers, “deep asleep now!” 
        Klaire’s eyes rolled up instantly into her head as it fell to the side. Any tension which had been in her body vanished instantly as she went completely limp. 
        Josh smiled and then moved his hand next to Rayne’s head. “Rayne…deep sleep!” he commanded with a finger snap. He felt Rayne’s body go instantly limp in front of him, her body sagging forward as her face pressed into Klaire’s lower stomach. He gently guided her forward and off of his manhood, and then gave her a gentle push to send her flopping down on the bed next to Klaire. Both of them laid there in a heap, completely and deeply asleep. 
        Josh laughed to himself as he sat down on the floor, leaning against Rayne’s legs. “Well…” he said to himself with a smile. “that went well.” 
 
To be Continued…
 
(Normally alt ending stories don’t get a continuation because of how they end but I really don’t think it will make much of a difference here which version you read, both will play just fine into the next chapter, so you get to decide your own canon… this time) =cP
       
Note of Stupidity: 
        So yeah… that dorm room entry plan is completely based on the real life path that I would use to sneak into the dorm room of my brother's girlfriend and my future wife (who were roommates at the time). A college that neither me, nor my brother actually attended as students. Now my brother would just call his girlfriend (who is now his wife) and she would meet him at the door. Me… Nah! I’m gonna do some spy level shit! What is described in the story is exactly how bad the security in the building was. I would just stand out by the door, wait for a group of people to come to the door and enter the door code and then just follow them in. I’d act like I was with them until we were past the usually empty security desk and then duck down the hallway to the far end where the stairs were, and then up the stairs I went. Usually I would knock on the door of my future wife's dorm room, but if she wasn’t there I would just hang out in the stairway peeking through the door at the reflection in the window to see when she was coming, usually surprising her in the same way I described Josh surprising Rayne. (Which was way easier on the girl Rayne is inspired by who was five feet tall, then it was on my five foot eleven inch tall future wife.) It was wild to say the least and never once was it lost on me that this was horrible for me to do, and the lack of security actually left the girls in the dorm very vulnerable to bad people… but since I wasn’t a bad person I would just shrug and keep doing it. 
        Sadly, September 11th happened later that year and after that it kind of felt wrong to circumvent the security like this, and I started to go through the correct guest process to come visit on campus, and pointed out the blatantly massive security hole that they had at the girls dorm.  A security hole that remained there until everyone I knew on that campus had graduated and that I have heard from other students currently living in that dormitory is still very much a ‘well known secret’. Apparently, if they close this massive security hole, then the girls can’t sneak their boyfriends in, which is strictly prohibited to have boys in the girls dorm after 9pm. 
And no, I am not going to tell you what college my wife went to. 
 
Thanks to Sleepygirl for doing the editing for me. If you would like to see her editing reactions to this story, and how it affected her while she was editing you can find that here: <a href=" ">Turnabout is Fair Play - Part 4 - Editing Banter.</a>
 
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Featuring: Josh, Rayne, Laura, Klaire
 
 
 
 
 
 